Friday, June 6, 2014

Chapter 4 of The Other Breed: Iifa and the Door to Who-Knows-Where

Sorry! I just realized that I forgot to post a new chapter yesterday. Here's chapter 4!



We’re behind the stone only a moment before we hear an odd slithering sound add itself into the creaking of the trees. I peek out, cautiously, to see three creatures emerge from the forest and have to clamp a hand over my mouth to suppress a gasp.
Quick and oddly graceful, the best description I can give is that they’re something in between a centipede and a ferret, though all of them are about the height of a horse. The heads are mostly mammalian, with stretched snouts and white markings around their eyes. Sleek brown fur, with an occasional white splotch, stretches down the length of the two outer creatures, though the middle one gleams a pure white. Their bodies are long - even though they’re now halfway from the edge of the forest to the stone, I still haven’t seen where they end. Tiny, sturdy arms stick out everywhere, each ending in a hand with long, thin fingers. Though they walk on some of these, they use others to press open the convoluted tree trunks, which move as if filled with liquid.
The creatures, now fearfully close, finally stop and riders rise from their backs. For a moment my breath catches and I freeze, convinced we’re going to be seen, but the riders focus on the tower behind us.
I hesitate. I know I should duck back behind the stone, but the middle rider has captured my attention. Though it’s necessary to shield my eyes to look, I can see she’s a woman. She glows white-hot, as if she’s come straight out of a forge, and she wears both a silver crown and silver armor. Her face is a collection of harsh, sharp features, but I suspect that she would be beautiful if those features weren’t so mangled by hatred and disgust. Maybe I’m thinking this, though, because she somehow resembles my mother, a woman who was certainly never called anything but beautiful, even if something about this woman in front of me is very different. Some cruelty in her movements and expression suggests she regrets little and questions herself not at all. At the same time, her crown and armor both command respect, covered as they are with inlay and set with rubies and diamonds that gleam like the eyes of demons. I shiver and edge a little further behind the stone, bumping Beth, who’s also stuck her head out to look. She uses my shoulder to steady herself but doesn’t let out a peep.
The other two creatures have riders, too, but these men are nothing like the middle woman. They’re completely covered in black, glass-like armor and draped in furs, like we’re in the Arctic instead of underneath a beating-hot sun. The bigger one shifts his fur cloak off his arms and I see that precious gems run up them, sparkling in the sun. Sharp blades poke out from the armor at his wrists, where the glass-like substance has been layered so thick that it almost looks like he has on cuffs. His movement also allows me to see the large, metal canisters which, I assume, are strapped to both men’s thighs. Hoses connect to these containers and snake up to a utility belt, where they attach to long-barreled guns. Light grey wiring twists along their armor, especially around the legs and arms, which makes them look like a combination of a knight and a circuit board.
Beth’s apparently seen enough because she ducks back behind the stone while letting out the faintest of whimpers. I can’t stop staring, though. The men’s visors are up and, even though their features are human, their skin is strange. It’s dark, tanned, but the texture is rough, making it look almost like they have scales.
The one on the left, who’d shifted his cloak, is older, maybe in his fifties or sixties. His hair is beginning to gray and his skin to wrinkle, but in no way does his age seem to have weakened him. He’s a giant, rippling with muscles. His armor seems only barely big enough, and, though the creature he’s on is much larger than the others, it seems to struggle beneath his weight. He holds himself rigid, alert, and the crease between his eyebrows tells me that this serious demeanor is normal.
The other soldier is younger, smaller and much lither. His eyes glint in a way that makes him look as though he’s not quite sane and the long scar from his cheekbone to his mouth only solidifies this conclusion. His smile is more like a grimace, but the way he shows his teeth makes it very clear that he’s pleased. Perhaps, like the woman beside him, he might be attractive, but the touch of insanity makes it impossible to tell. I shiver, my eyes drawn back to the gleaming woman. Something about her, even next to these men, makes my blood run cold.
Beth tugs on my arm and I pull back, hiding behind the stone. I’ve had more than enough of a look. Anything else and I’ll press our luck. I turn to see that Beth’s eyes are wider than I’ve ever seen. She hasn’t released my arm and her grip is tight, as if I’m anchoring her to the world. She raises her other hand and places a finger to her lips.
Yeah, as if I need to be told to keep quiet. I just give her a small nod. Alyssa, next to Beth, is shaking her head in disbelief, brow furrowed. I’m not sure whether she’s rationalizing this place or convincing herself it’s not real.
I look past them at Hombre, wondering if he has some kind of answer, but instead he looks pale and panicked one moment and then frustrated the next. His eyes keep shifting colors: blue to scarlet to blue to violet to blue. He seems to be restraining himself, mouthing over and over, as if the words are some spell, “The golden woman can’t be destroyed, remember your duty, the golden woman can’t be destroyed, remember your duty . . .”
I frown. What does that mean? Who is this woman and why does he seem to know her?
Whoever she is, her voice is now snaking across the tiny glade, “I want to kill those pit dinths this time. All of them. Not leave a single cowardly, disgusting specimen alive.”
We’re all frozen behind the pillar, not daring to move a muscle, and Darien’s face turns its palest yet. I don’t know what a pit dinth is, but from her tone I can tell it’s an insult.
Another voice, one of the men, introduces itself, the words very distinct and clear: “Creator Vehnia willing, we will eradicate them, Leader Iifa.”
I’m not sure what or who Vehnia is, either, but I’m pretty sure the only people they can be talking about are the ones in that tower. The ones Hombre told us we need to get to, who are supposed to be able to help us.
The other man chuckles, “As we would say in Farah, nothing quite rivals blood when working up a sweat. We’ll be warming ourselves in their death soon.” His voice is incredibly deep, like the thrum of the earth, and from his manner of speaking I know it has to be the man with the crazy eyes. His words are tinted, slightly, by a strange accent that resembles nothing back on Earth.
Darien reaches for my bracelet, still on my wrist, and I snatch my arm away, glaring at him. He frowns, but mouths: “Hide it.” I hesitate, but if he’s worried about it I think I should listen. I release the clasp and then hesitate before deciding to stuff it into my bra. I look over at Hombre and he frowns, shrugs, and then nods, satisfied that it’s out of sight.
“Don’t be vulgar,” the first man is telling the other, his proper speech filled with disgust. He must be the large, brutish man, but the way he speaks is somehow contrary to what I would’ve expected.
“Are you afraid of blood, Veren?” The smaller man snorts, apparently amused by the thought, “You know, we drank it when I was fighting in the south. We preferred to recognize who and what we were, rather than claiming we only killed for duty. Tell me, do you truly hate seeing the look in the eyes of the dying as they witness you as their killer? Or are you just afraid it makes you like me?”
A chill runs up my spine, and Beth’s fingernails cut into my skin. Veren retorts, his voice dripping with loathing, “I’m not like you. I wasn’t forced to join the army or to come to this place because I’d committed too many monstrosities. I chose this fight and this cause. When I return, my family will be proud, and my people will honor me. When this war ends, they will kill you – if you are still alive.”
The woman’s voice cuts in, “Stop your quarreling. Veren, whatever Chul’s background, so long as he obeys my orders, it is forgiven. We have not enough men to accept only saints.”
“Yes, Leader Iifa,” Veren sounds respectful, but a certain bite to his words tells me that he disagrees.
“Wipe that sneer off your face, Chul,” Iifa snaps, “I understand you’re new to the command your skill has earned you, but I need a leader, not some petulant child looking to provoke fights. Our enemy is in that tower, not here, and I need you to be focused on fighting them. Why do you think I brought you here? I’m not the only one who sometimes needs a reminder.”
Her words hang in the air for a moment, before Chul, reluctantly, says, “If you command it, Leader Iifa.”
“Good. What was the name of the young man they just named to command, here?”
“Ki,” Veren answers.
“Ki?” Iifa responds, “Sounds like the name of a friend. Hopefully his watchers have gotten sight of me by now. Even if my presence doesn’t make him nervous, his people will be thrown into a fervor. It’s been a long time since I fought for this tower.”
“Maybe they’ll let us in the front door,” Chul remarks.
She snorts, “That would be a welcome change. We must head back, now. There are other matters we must attend to.”
I hold my breath as I hear them retreat into the trees. Beth releases her death-grip at last and I glance around the stone to make sure the soldiers are gone. I breathe out a sigh of relief when I see the clearing’s empty.
Alyssa’s next to me, now, staring at the tree line and muttering to herself, “I don’t get this. How was she glowing like that? And those things they were riding – how does something like that exist?”
 “Darien? What’s going on? Who were they?” Beth asks, much more serious than usual. She shivers, “That one man . . .”
Hombre is tense, his voice strained, as he states, “We have to get out of here.” Before any of us can say anything, he’s hurrying to the edge of the clearing. He pauses there, looks down, and then looks at us. “You need to come with me. I don’t think I need to convince you that it’s dangerous to stay here, right?”
I find myself slowly shaking my head.
He turns back around, inhales, and then leaps, landing on the wall before he turns to us. He insists, “We need to go. Now.” His expression tells me that he expects one of us to argue, but none of us do. I bite my lip and step away from the stone. Beth’s on my heels and Alyssa’s not far after, her dazed look turning into one of determination.
It’s now that I realize that something occupies the space between the tower and the wall. For a moment I think that it’s gleaming, pristine water, but then I notice the lack of waves. My stomach drops. The tower is surrounded entirely by a glass pane that’s been placed a good two stories down. I can see movement beneath it, but find myself needing to look away, biting my lip and trying not to imagine plummeting through it, shards of broken glass piercing through me.
I take a deep breath and try to focus on the jump.
Looking down, it seems that all the support and ground that’s supposed to be in-between the wall and the clearing has just vanished into an abyss. The hole isn’t very wide but I still feel my heart in my throat. Great.
“I dunno if I can make that,” Beth says next to me, shifting anxiously.
“We have to,” I tell her.
She shifts again, glancing back at the trees as if weighing her options.
Before I can start to reassure her, Alyssa vaults over the pit, landing easily. Beth and I stare at her, and when she turns to us and sees our surprise she rolls her eyes, and just says, “Come on.” I guess her enthusiasm to get out of here has over-ruled her shame at agreeing with Hombre about something.
I inhale deeply, back up, and then hurl myself off the edge of the clearing. There’s a moment where it’s almost like I’m flying and then my foot connects with the hard rock of the wall. The landing sends a jolt of pain through my knee, but other than that I’m fine. I breathe a sigh of relief, though I can’t help but still feel nervous now that there are steep drops to either side of me. I try not to entertain the question as to which death would be preferable.
Beth lands beside me and latches onto my arm to steady herself, inhaling sharply. I stumble a bit but keep my footing and turn to give her a wry smile, trying to be reassuring, “Nice landing. You’re fine, see?”
“This thing isn’t wide enough for me to be ‘fine,’” she mutters. “Let’s just go.”
I turn and see that Hombre and Alyssa have already taken off. Beth’s pushing me forward, clearly anxious to be off the ledge. I hate running, but this isn’t the time to complain. I start off after them, Beth right behind me.
I try to ignore the drops on either side, especially as my feet keep sliding on the smooth stone. I almost go down twice in the first few strides but then I adjust my steps, trying to land on the balls of my feet. It feels strange, but it helps.
I grit my teeth. We’re not far from the clearing, but already my muscles are tight. Annoyed with my body, I push myself to keep going, trying not to think about that man, Chul, and how that woman could be capable of controlling someone who’s so clearly deranged. Who is she? And why does she seem to make Hombre both furious and terrified at the same time?
My body’s insistence that I shouldn’t be running only gets more persistent as we approach the bridge to the tower. Years of tennis have made running second-nature to Alyssa, and Hombre doesn’t seem to have any problems, either, but I can’t match their pace at all. I start to feel panicked. If that woman comes after us, Beth and I are screwed. I keep charging forward, but my breath is beginning to tear up the back of my throat and my bracelet is now stabbing my boob. I wrap my arms around my chest and keep running, terrified that my lack of fitness will result in my death. From the raggedness of Beth’s breath, I don’t think she’s doing much better.
I celebrate briefly as we pass what I think is a halfway point. Far ahead of us, Hombre and Alyssa have already reached the bridge to the tower. Hombre looks back and shouts, “Hurry!”
Easy for him to say. My vision’s beginning to go a little fuzzy at the edges and my mouth is so dry it could be a desert. I can’t help but imagine the woman or one of her minions sliding out onto the wall in front of us or throwing some deadly weapon from one of the clearings we pass. An image of me falling worms itself into my mind and I try to ignore it, focusing on my harsh breath, my screaming muscles, the sweat pouring down my face – anything to distract myself. One step after another I’m making progress, and each step means I’ve avoided death.
We finally reach the bridge, and, though we’re still a long ways from the tower, some of my panic subsides as my feet turn onto it. Behind me, I hear Beth round onto the bridge, too, and my fear evaporates almost completely. I wonder if it’s due to the humming I hear below, drifting up from beneath the glass. Sounds of life and hope seem contained there, rising up to reassure me that I can make it, that I’ll be alright. A cramp in my leg wants to differ, but I ignore it and keep running because, ahead of us, Hombre and Alyssa are finally at the door, pounding on it and yelling. I muster up the last of my strength to cover the bridge and charge forward, step by painful step, until at last I’m close enough that I don’t need to force myself to run anymore.
Out-of-breath, sweaty, parched, I’m thankful that I can now reduce my speed to a crawl. Beth, behind me, has already done so, and I hear her gasping for air.
The door is now beginning to open, though too slowly for comfort. I turn away, embarrassed that Hombre and Alyssa are nowhere near the mess that Beth and I are.
As I try to slow my breathing, though, I notice movement in the trees behind us. I frown, wiping my forehead with my shirt, and as I do so I catch her white-hot gaze. I pause, petrified. For a moment she just stares, but I swear that, even at this distance, even with how blinding she is, I can see a smile creep up her face to transform her into something beautiful. I blink, confused, and then squint to try to make her out better, but she’s already sinking back into the trees. Beth grabs my arm and I stumble as she pulls me through the large doors into who-knows-where.

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